After writing the entire first draft of I Am Nobody in 11 days, I seem to have forgotten what I do with my time when I'm not writing I Am Nobody. So I figured I'd start work on the second draft. You can find the new and improved version of this chapter at the bottom of this page if you feel so inclined. I left the first draft up because I'm lazy, the second draft is the one labeled "Draft 2".
Believe it or not, looking at these two versions side by side. It took me a good eight hours today to make the changes that I made. I have to say that it's impressively better than before though. The long and hard work made a huge difference.