Saturday, November 17, 2012

I Am Nobody Chapter 3 draft 2

Another chapter of the second draft of I Am Nobody is done and can be found at the bottom of this page.

This chapter may seem a little mundane.  It basically sets out what Mia's normal morning routine is.  There is a reason that I included such a detailed description of what she normally does in the morning before school.  Because near the end that routine is interrupted.  So, having what goes on normally established early on is important for that scene later on to have any impact.  Additionally there is a huge amount of development for her character and a few holes in the back story are filled in.  More so in this second draft.

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