Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Exile Chapter 50 Draft 4

I've finished chapter 50 of the fourth draft of Exile and it can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.

There were a lot of really minor changes to this chapter in this draft, mostly small continuity errors and fixing of bad writing. It was pretty close to being good as it was.

This one is another really long chapter, and it doesn't have so many viewpoint and location changes as the chapters before and after it do, but it's got a couple in it. Mostly I figured that the battle for the fate of the Four Kingdoms was exciting enough on it's own and didn't need the jumping around to make it feel ore hectic than it already is.

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