Sunday, January 20, 2013

I Am Nobody Chapter 15 Draft 2

I've finished up the second draft of chapter 15 of I Am Nobody and you can find it near the bottom of this page.

A lot of small rewrites, and a few things added to flesh things out a bit more, especially with Mia's feelings.  I really want to get across how utterly horrified she is over the fact that people are dying in her place, and how useless she feels at not being able to do anything to stop it.

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