Sunday, January 13, 2013

I Am Nobody Chapter 11 Draft 2

I've finished up my second draft of I Am Nobody Chapter 11 and you can find it at the bottom of this page if you feel so inclined.

Mostly what has changed here is just the wording.  I've added a few things to flesh out the story and the way that Mia views things a bit too.  People who went to Copper Hills High School will likely recognize the description of the school cafeteria in this chapter also.  I tossed that in as a bit of a nod to my past, as much as I absolutely hated my high school years.

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