Sunday, May 13, 2012

The Eternal Chain Chapter 14 Draft 1

I've finished the first draft of Chapter 14 of The Eternal Chain and it can be found at the bottom of this page.

Behindred is introduced as a villain here and one of the Seven.  The original version of this chapter was basically just him ranting whilst Brand sat there being a total wuss about it.  In this there's a lot more violence on both sides, and I think I've built up the rivalry between them a lot better this time around before they even meet, so there's a lot more things going on character-wise than in the original.

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