Friday, April 30, 2010

Exile Chapter 11 rewrites

I've finished the second draft of Exile Chapter 11, and it can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.

This chapter pretty much doubled in size, and nearly all of it is filling in descriptions and filling in details about the world in general. And as always I changed a lot of the sentance and paragraph structure to make it easier to read. I swear I must have been high (figuratively) when I wrote some of this the first time around, some of these sentences are completely uninteligible.

The first draft of this story ended at 117,352 words.
The second draft is currently at 134,373 words.

That's over a 17,000 word difference.

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