Soooooooooooooo, done with Chapter 32 of Memories of What Never Was. If you feel the great urge to read it, you can find it at the bottom of this page.
Some character building here. I also wanted to reference Ghostbusters with the stairs, but without using the exact line, and Raven dropping the F bomb at the end is a bit of an inside joke for me. In previous versions of this story he was death on anyone using bad language. It just made me laugh to toss that in as a joke where I'm pretty much the only one that will get it.