Wednesday, December 12, 2012

I Am Nobody Chapter 6 Draft 2

I've finished up the second draft of I Am Nobody Chapter 6, and you can find it at the bottom of this page.

The biggest changes in this chapter are in how things are worded, and in added descriptive elements that were lacking in the first draft. Also, something I was tipped off to by a female friend, is that Mia is probably going to be utterly terrified of being raped herself after having seen the aftermath of one, and so I've tried to add some elements of that to her character as well.  This is something I never really thought of, but now that I think about it, I was pretty stupid not to have.  I began in the last chapter, but its a lot more present here.

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