Work suuuuuuucks in the snow. Takes 2 hrs longer than normal, you freeze your butt off all day long because the heaters in the postal vehicals only work when they feel like it, which isn't often, and you get completely soaked from the knees down.
/whinefest off
Anyway, I've finished Chapter 47 of the fourth draft of Exile and it can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.
There was a ton of work needed on this chapter. And it actually ended up shorter than the third draft was. I cut out a really large chunk of Lilia explaining how Mal's new knife works, glossing over it because a detailed explanation really didn't belong there and kinda derailed the flow of events.
Other than that there wasn't much in the way of big changes, mostly I just fixed bad writing, added more description, and tried to make everything more coherrent.
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