day off woohoo, Chapter 37 of the fourth draft of Exile is done and can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.
sooooo, this chapter has changed to make it a bit deeper than it was previously. I've added in a lot of introversion in both Silmera and Mal, thinking about their feelings for each other, and what they're supposed to do now. They're both hurting, crying out for help, and needing each other, but circumstances are pulling them apart. They needed to feel helpless, out of control, sad and angry at the situation and that didn't really come across in previous drafts. The original title of this chapter was Subtle Blackmail, but i changed it to just Blackmail because there was really nothing subtle about it at all.
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