I've finished the second drafts of Exile chapters 5 and 6 and they can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.
Again, not much has changed beyond sentance and paragraph structure in these chapters, though a lot of missing description has been added to the village and people. I did cut out some of the character introduction work I did in the first draft for Mal and Lilia as I already introduced these characters earlier in the current draft.
The first draft of this story ended at 117,352 words.
The second draft is now at 126,688 words.
That is a 9300 word difference so far.
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