Done with the first chapter of the second draft of Exile and it can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.
This chapter is the second section of the prologue of the first draft. Mostly I added some greater details and more description to the world, and changed some of the sentance and paragraph structure to have things starting off with action words rather than nouns and pronouns.
The First draft finished at 117,352 words.
The Second Draft is now at 118,250 words.
In just two chapters I've added almost a thousand words already. If you were to look at the two drafts side by side, though they basically tell the same story they're very different from each other.
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