Sooooooo, I finished up the first draft of chapter 29 of Memories of What Never Was, and you can find it at the bottom of this page if you feel the great urge to read it.
What I wanted to do with Kriss was have her completely broken in the beginning, then sort of get better, and then have all the pieces that are coming back together inside of her just get completely shattered again. So this chapter is the completely shattering again chapter. She is the hero of this story, and this is her darkest moment, the point where she truly sees what she is, and what she has allowed herself to become. A hero has to be tested and tried before they can rise above their faults and become what they need to become in order to win in the end. She was getting better, but she was still broken inside. She needed this so she could stop lying to herself and move on to really healing, but she can't do that alone. She needs someone to show her the way, but that's a bit further down the line. There's a few more things that need to happen first.
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