And Chapter 28 too.

Did some more writing tonight after a bit of a break, and finished up Chapter 28 of Memories of What Never Was, and if you feel the great urge, you can find it here

This chapter can basically be summed up as "Meanwhile, here's what's happening in Kriss' head."  I've purposely not had a chapter from her point of view since Brand told her how to start dealing with her emotional issues, just because I want this chapter to illustrate how differently she's started to see the world, and because it makes the next chapter a bit more of a sucker punch, by having her first saying that life isn't so bad after all, in time, she can learn to deal with it, and them almost immediately get shown how wrong she is.  Is it a bit manipulative on my part?  Uh, yeah.  Of course it is.

Memories of What Never Was Chapters 25-27

So there I was, minding my own business, when some annoying Brazilian fungus hopped off of a package I was delivering and took up residence in my sinuses... for five freaking months...  So yeah, one of the last things you feel like doing afters spending a hard day at work out in the heat with the sinus infection from hell is to sit down and work some more.  Now that I've run out of excuses for not finishing this book up, hopefully I'll finally finish this book up.  I kind of expected it to be done by now, buuuuuuuuuut things keep popping up and taking all of my time and energy.  It's very annoying. 

So, anyway, I finally got back to writing this week, and have chapters 25-27 of Memories of What Never Was up on my site if you feel the great urge to read them.  You can find them at the bottom of this page.  In these chapters we have the big reveal of who the villain of the story really is, and what he wants.  We also have some character moments for Raven and Temari.