Exile Chapter 6 Draft 4

I've finished draft 4 of Exile Chapter 5 and it can be downloaded at the bottom of this page

Bunch of small edits here, just clearing up language and making it more readable. Biggest change is the way that Lilia talks. She's from a rural village out even further into nowhere than the middle of nowhere. The way she talks reflects that. Though Mal grew up in this same village he talks differently because his father is from somewhere else, and he speaks with his father's accent, something I'll mention somewhere in the story. Other than that, it hasn't changed much.

And at just over 295,000 words Exile is now officially the longest thing I have ever written.