Memories of What Never Was Draft 4 done

So, finished the 4th draft of Memories of What Never Was, and you can read it at the bottom of this page if you are so inclined.

So with this draft mostly what I did was just smoothed out the writing a bit more, removed some unnecessary words here and there, and I added in a new idea or three that came to me as I was working on it. I also did a little more work on Kriss' character, and now I think I finally have her exactly where I want her to be.  I mean, she's only the hero of the story.  She, of all characters, kind of has to be done as close to perfectly as possible.