Exile Chapter 46 draft 4

I've finihed chapter 46 of the fourth draft of Exile and it can be downloaded at the bottom of this page.

This chapter needed a lot of work. There was a lot of just general bad writing, some very big continuity errors, and a lot of missing character developement on Lilia's part. All of that has been fixed, and it's all looking much better now.

Ok, so earlier we have Mal finding his reason to stop running away and stand up and fight. In this chapter you can really see the changes in his character that have come about because of all of the things he's been through. He's not an awkward, whining, emo-filled douchebag that thinks only of himself anymore, he's moved beyond that and basically grown up and taken reponsibility. Through his hardships he's grown as a character, to be more than he was at the beginning of the story. His behavior in this chapter is also influenced by what the Northern Sage told him he should do.